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Can someone PLEASE help me EDIT my PARAGRAPH??? (EASY POINTS)?
Economically speaking, Mexica was a land of vast wealth waiting to be capitalized. When Cortes arrived he sought not to take over and steal everyone’s gold but to trade with the Indians. When the Aztecs approached Cortes and showered him with gold, he delightfully showered them back with “green and yellow strings of Beads, which one might imagine to be amber. And when they had take them and looked at them, greatly did they marvel” (91). Being that the land was also filled with “wolves, foxes, partidges, pigeons, rabbits..,” hunting became a tool in which to capitalize on too.
Can someone make it flow smoother and sound better overall?
Mexica was economically a land of vast wealth waiting to be capitalized upon. When Cortes arrived, he sought to trade with the Indians, rather than steal their gold and enforce his rule. When the Aztecs approached Cortes, showering him with gold, he reciprocated the gesture by giving them “green and yellow strings of Beads". The amber like beads were greatly marvelled by the Aztecs. The land was also prosporous for hunting, populated by “wolves, foxes, partidges, pigeons, rabbits..,” and naturally another area ripe for capitalization.
Not sure about the quotes you've put in, is that all one long quote from "green and..." to "they marvel" its too long i think, i've tried to edit that part as best i can but sorry if i've mistaken something! if you make it clearer i'll re-edit my answer if you wish. hope i've helped somewhat!
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